Very nice!
I could easily relate,
which made me love it even more!!
I liked the repeating stanza at the beginning and the end...
my favorite part was...

It roams from vein to vein,
attempting to cause slow, torturous pain

That showed a lot of emotion and imagery and I loved it

Great poem with a little work it would make a great song. It had a great flow to it and I really liked the words you used. It seems like a dark love poem to me that is part of the reason I like it. Another 5/5.

This was wonderfully written and it flowed really well. but i really didnt get the point of what you were trying to say? but overall,great poem! 5/5

You write beautifully. I can relate to this poem really well because I am in love too and that's exactly how I feel.

The repetitveness of the line "There's this feeling" was a bit overplayed. I mean, you didn't have to do it that many times. However, the rest of the poem was good.