That was deep. 5/5, I like it alot, and it is very, very true.

Nicely written with a great message....love the last lines!

I really like it but the connection you made between ours was different. Mine was about some one I didnt love, romantically. she was my best friend and the poem was to open her eyes because she was kinda in denial about a lot of things

Ah very well done. it was different and refreshing. it was subtle yet not too forceful.

5/5 David

Aint that the truth...
lovely work!
I just submitted a butt-load on poetry lol!

Well done... true and it reveals what you believe.

Good job! really tru lol!

Good job! really tru lol!

This poem was really guud 5/5 :D

Nice jobbbb! [=

What can i say it was a good poem ^_^ this time ill just leave with a positive comment instead of more of a negative one
Mark
4/5

I dunno wat 2 write besides that that poem was really good

Good Job!! Beautiful work!!

I like this pome!!It really is tru

So very true and very well written, but on line 7, in my opinion, I think you should use the word loss instead of lost and the word least is spelled wrong, unless you wanted them to be like that then never mind lol. Overall it was very very good. Keep writing!! 5/5

Beautiful poem!....it'l look better wth a few spellings corrected.but all the same-it's great!...i liked it!
xxPoojaxx

Ha nice, i like this poem alot, somehow it has rythem and thats good. keep it up

I really like this poem!

Interesting, enjoyed it.

I really enjoyed ths, very deep, and well written.