Wow loved the flow and transitions, word usage, and all the above, 5/5 maybe u could read one of mine.

Hey good poem....yeah sheding blood is not worth your time....a lot of ppl find relief in sheding blood....it just cant be...the world is to stupid to relize how stupid it is....so thers hope...nice expressing your feelings in poetry

Nice one but no matter how tormenting the life is, we should not resort to shedding of blood. Shits happens, life keeps goin so, just write it away. God bless...