This is very good! there is a lot of emotion in this poem. i hope this isnt a true experience for u because noone should have to go through this.

I dont know after reading this should i wipe my wet eyes or should i write a comment......
this poem was way more important than a few comments here saying it is good or not.
this is a poem that can melt a rock.
indeed i give this poem the best poem of 2007 in this site.
the feelings were true, the words were so right and sometimes i was about to forget it is your story or poem as i was so deeply touched by every word of it and now when im writing this poem, tears are flowing from my eyes as i can so much relate to this.

i wanted to tell you great job, but i think it is not enough for this poem.
yet im giving you a 5/5 cause i dont know how to break into the computer and give you 1000000000000 rather than a simple 5.

HEart renching, bloody, aching, vengeful and hatefilled,
An enjoyable read of this topic.

4.5
Things can be better abou it though. You have a good vocab it seems but you should use it through out.
ALthough I don't generally enjoy reading non-rhyming poems it's not my style so this comment may waste your time depending on how you use it.

Besides from this poem being long, there was nothing else I could comment about. It was a great poem, the topic isn't all original, but I mean, there isn't much to write about these days. The emotions were true and real, so an overall good poem. Keep on writing man.

Wow very touching... and full of deep emotions,, i think this is perfect for me its not boring to read its very enjoyable its a bit long but its really nice... thanks for sharing!

The subject was a bit cliche, but NOT the poem itself.
I liked it. keep it up, hun.

So sad and sorrowful,i couldn't help stopping my tears...you have talent hun
At least think that way
Good job
Laura