Comments : Our Song

  • 13 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Oh my, i am almost crying at how sad this is. Its amazing 5/5. wow, its.. im lost for works. good work!!!! oh my.... wicked...

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Bryan

    Very good poem ciao, the flow is absolutely great, i give it a 5/5 as always!!! keep it up!!!

  • Wonderful poem.
    Absolutely amazing.
    The flow was flawless and the emotion was shown.

    'I only have one down fall, it's sad, some may say.
    I can't help if because it's with me everyday.
    It's the one thing keepng me holding out so long-
    Baby, it's the lyrics and the melody of Our Song.'

    Beautiful 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh this was so sad and yet written so beautifully at the same time.
    The opening stanza really pulled me into the poem, and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
    The flow was perfect in this.

  • 13 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Very beautiful poem..i loved the flow!...very well penned!
    Good job

  • 13 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This is a beautifully written poem. i really enjoyed listening to it. it as awsome. :) reminded me of another poem that you have written. </3

  • 13 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Congratulations on coming first in my contest.
    I'm not big fan of this style so I won't ahve much to say if all your poems are the same.
    4.5

  • 13 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    I justed loved this poem. I think it's one of my favorite poems. Thanks for entering the contest. And I hope you join some more 5/5