Another well written poem 5/5

Very good
I liked the first one better
but I really enjoyed this
Great job!!

'you see yourself as a gun range
let everyone take their shot
your pants are stained with guilt
because guilt is all you've got'

i really liked these lines!! well done keep up the good work
mel

'you see yourself as a gun range
let everyone take their shot
your pants are stained with guilt
because guilt is all you've got'

i really liked these lines!! well done keep up the good work
mel

If words could kill, he's be dead on that gun range...lol So delightful this was.