Comments : Stop and Think

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I understand this poem and that's what makes it good; that it's personal. i like the first stanza the most. it's a piece from the heart and a non-rhymer...cool to see you do that!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    It may not be your best (as you said) but it was still pretty damn good
    I would never have thought of associating stop signs and red lights to going back home after running away
    You've done an excellent job! Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*