Comments : Father

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Interesting, am i wrong to get the impression that you meant, do you call them, or do they call you.. instead of
    "do you call them, or do you call them."

    any way this poem confused me a little the flow was abit shakey still a emotional subject obviously for you as expressed in your poem. 4/5 nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Change it to Mother and it could be about me
    A very powerful little poem, well done
    5/5
    *Gem*