This is one of my favorite poems, ever!
I absolutly love it!

Little miss heartbreaker, such a shame for a beauty queen,
Her ironic allure got the best of her during the love scene.

Thats the best part! Great ending!
:]

I absolutely loved this, when I read the title I didn't expect anything along these lines. You did an amazing job with this poem. Just as your other one, it had a flawless flow, rhythm and emotions.

another great write.
keep it up. :D
<3teria.

Damn fine poem. Abrupt. Powerful. Intense. The flow and diction are incredible.

What a lovely title :]!

Pee.ess.
your poem's lovely.

L.x

I love how it stereotyped...
Bleach blonde hair? I smiled at that :]
I loved the second stanza.
First and second line.
It explained so much of
What was going to happen.
You made me think of
Fantasy land.
Where everything can happen.
I don't know.
Lol.
Anywayz 5/5 :]

This is a gr8 poem, not ever have i read a poem quite like this.

Little miss heartbreaker, such a shame for a beauty queen,
Her ironic allure got the best of her during the love scene.

I loved that part. Great poem 5/5
Janaynay