Wow that was great transition could feel the pain. 5/5

I disagree with you saying the endings not good- it thought it was beautifully written and gave depth to the poem. the last stanza in particular is really powerful and well written. keep it up! xXx

I liked this spoem, It is full of emtions deep and strong. the last staza was my favorite part as well. Excellent write 5/5

4th stanza....needs another line to make it even , flow is great though. hits home. great write :)