It's a good poem. I must have failed to interpret... I understood the meaning... but in small detail... next time. give more options so someone can interpret the meanin of the poem. thank you. voted 4/5

Great work!
This was very well written!
5/5
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It si very unique as Ash lovingly put it.
its rather good.
but there is somethign that kind of bothered me in this sentence:
"I slept with the dark hair Nightess"
it should be Haired

other then that i say its pretty good.
keep written<33Brandee

There's something very intriguing about this poem, I like the beginning bit most and how you picked out those certain dark things. very well done

Serenity
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