Nice job
These are my fav lines
'No more emotions
She is a zombie
She is everything they wanted'

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Keep up the great work!

I liks this poem, nice work. Very sad and disturbing but when that's the idea your ging for that's quite alright. i like.
<3
L.C

Hey Nice poem!...very sad though...but anyways,i loved it!..Good wrk!

Good poem. keep up the writing and ill keep reading. 5/5 thanks for the comment