Comments : Look at what you did

  • 12 years ago

    by kayanna

    Gyal dis poem is tuff u no frm readin ur page and dis poem i can tell u r really depressed
    well jus keep ur hed high and dnt give in and up on life x

  • 12 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Well...first of all beautiful poem..lovely work!..well done!..
    hey but i hp u r doing better..ur profile seems like u r in hell lot of probs..on a personal basis,..maybe u should just move on..rather then give up in life n tk care..though the world might not mean much to u..there mite be ppl for whom u actually mean the world!...hp u r fine
    Anyway...ur poem is well presented...kp writing!u can reach a lot higher!!
    xxPoojaxx

  • Thnx :)

  • 12 years ago

    by lizzle

    Great poem,but it was sad!....and i know u dont no me,but i just wanna say that dont ever give in to depression!!!or even think of suicide!cause u shouldnt hav to end ur own life,just cause of sadnesss....im not trying to b one of those peopel who think they know wat u feel....i just dont want ppl taking there own life cause of sadness!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    WoW!! Just wow!! That was AWESOME!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by bleedingtears

    This is good. Nice job dear. Keep your head up high.. things will get better hun. I'm really depressed to but i have people helping me through this stuff. If you ever need to talk to anyone just email me bball-freak-@hotmail.com

  • 12 years ago

    by bleedingtears

    This is good. Nice job dear. Keep your head up high.. things will get better hun. I'm really depressed to but i have people helping me through this stuff. If you ever need to talk to anyone just email me bball_freak-@hotmail.com

  • 12 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Pretty! lol nah I really like that thats awesome! but, it seems like life is hell for you.. which sucks btw, cause mine sucks as well if you ever want to get something off ya chest just tell me and I will listen ^-^ I like your poems they are very awesome! good work XD!

  • 12 years ago

    by Princess

    Again I can relate just like with all of your other poems lol I love it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    So sad, but very good! dont give up, theres a lot to live for really, you just need to find it first! :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Parttimefan

    I like this one... it is truly deep and passionate. Like you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    This was a real deep poem,
    I liked the way you showed a bunch of emotion with little words. I think its great when people show a lot of emotion with using little words!!! Good job!
    5/5 :)