Make love to me with all your heart
Binding together our souls for all to see
Promise me you will never part
Hey...just get nasty
^^^^
H-0-L-Y M-O-L-Y ..... BILL
I could feel the web of passions fire burning through the stanzas of this hot little number ....

Awesome read ! Woot
Luanne

Very well written Dear, could have gone in the explicit section though, haha :P.

Anyways, this was yet another one of your poems I really enjoyed. ^_^

"Put your lips upon mine
Kiss my soul with fire"

^^ I loved those lines.

5.5

Bill
Wow! what a passion filled poem. Excellent work.

Put your lips upon mine
Kiss my soul with fire
Drink me in like wine
Take me with desire

Loved this stanza.
Take Care Cindy

Nice work! I like it.

Beautiful wrk....just great!
Loved it!!

This is awesome

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems, when you have the tme.

Best Wishes
Wallace

NICEE..5.5

Haha, this was awsome, flowed relee well, just get nasty lol very interesting [[=
Carissa

OoOO very nice
and passionate
I love that
wonderful job
5/5
love kaila

WOW! You go Bill!!! Good write!

WOW!!!!!!! amazing writing right there....you set the mood and do so in a very tasteful manner, certainly a hard thing to do..but you nailed it, great work dude..wow

Very nice and beautiful

Beautiful poem. Very well done. xx