Wow! Interesting! I really enjoyed reading the poem. Great flow and nice work of imagination... Added to that it ends nicely. Very well done!

I'm at a loss for words.
As i was reading this, i found myself drawing closer and closer to the screen as i began to genuinly care about what was going to happen. It felt like i was on edge.
And the ending was a stroke of genuis. It leaves it open for the reader to interpret what was happening..
Outstanding..
5/5
*Gem*

I have to say, I really enjoyed the ending, I liked how you left it open, as that leaves the reader's imagination free to roam.
Within the first few lines I was hooked and I thought it got better from there.
The flow was flawless throughout, and the imagery you created was wonderfully done.