Dreams r not real, thats ur view n its surely proved in ur poem. This is a nice poem with good rhyming stanzas. Good work :-)

plx read 'English for the confused'

With love
Fsams

Tis a beautiful poem, and acrostics are one of my favorite styles, and you did excellent, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!! p.s. cool name, lol.

This one is a bit better. i liked the flow, the point of the acrostic was said but it wasn't proven, but over all nicely done 5/5

I liked it. I think it was a good aristocrat. the only thing is to check ur grammer thats all i saw. Im gonna give it a 4/5