I like your style.

I votee 5 :)
loves it <3

The first line, you need to add a e to scream. you left it out. but only small mistake. this was a great and very enjoyable poem. yet the sadness was full on and evident...

5/5 David

This is great i love it kinda hard to follow in some places but it is still awesome great job and thanks for the comment

keenan