I really like this poem....i can really relate to it .....its very passionate...i like when you said "now i need you to smile one last time Tell me that it will be ok"...i really like that part i can really relate to that saying...lol....great job!...and thanks for the nice comments you left me ..they were a great help!...im glad you liked my poems ...yeah i need to work on them lol...so thanks again!