Wow what a good read, i cant critise someones work who is better than mineunfortunalty i don feel it is my place if you undrstand. I love the flow and the stanzas i really got into it (until the phone rang and i nearly fell out my chair) yup good job 10/5 lol

xxx alex xxx

Wow, very beautiful poem! I liked it very much. 5/5

Eeee I love that poem! I like the names mostly, coz I feel they have a certain depth to them. They're kinda eerie but so interesting! The story in the poem is quite interesting, because it's a change from most of the poems that are posted on this website. All of your poems have a certain difference to them, which make them worth every single moment I spend reading them. 5/5!

History? The mummy? Very good. I like it. It has good flow and you have really managed to step into the other person and understand... 5/5

Hey you may not remember me but you commented my poem called bullets. Btw your really good keep it up, ive got some new stuff you should check it out.

Good job...5/5...check mine out

Good work!!..i love the way this 1 has flowed...excellent work!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Haha i like how you interpreted that scene from "The Mummy" from the mummy's point of view. keep up the good work. 5/5 ihope u get the chance 2 comment and rate my poems!

I enjoyed this one, the words create strong images
in mind. 5/5