Amazing!
The flow was flawless, the word usage was great, & the story told was great. I can relate, so if you ever need to talk, I'm always here! =] Wonderful job! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

El good job-o dearest!!!

you know I always love your poetry... and this one was no different. =) fantastic, 5/5, and im glad you read this in the last slam.

Ally-lanah

Hey this is really good.

Very well written with best choice of words conveying strong meaning. Its great 5/5. God bless u n keep u happy. If u wanna smile 4 me plx read my 'fart is an art'

With love
Fsams

"I tell myself
I don't need help
So I pull down my sleeve
And start over again."

It makes you think...how many out there are literally or even figuratively 'pulling down sleeves?' So many people out there are hiding scars...i think this poem is one that everyone can relate to in one way or another. Keep writing!

I agree with skyfire ~ everyones pulling down their sleeves. (in my poetry, i call it cheating at life). this poem is really honest - not many ppl have that much perspective on their probs in life. great writing!
~claire

WELL DONE
i like this poem,
it flowes well and had no really akward stops or anything
take care
geo