Ahhhhaha, love it. I want to try this!!
Too funny:
And Listerine is more absurd

Cool poem, Corinne!

"And Listerine is more absurd
And sure your tongue to harm
Yet mouthwash wasn't meant to hurt
Like an acidic storm"
^^^ My favorite stanza, nicely done!

Cute idea...and very funny by the way! I am definitely going to try a parody someday. Well done!

Good job! Nice to see the comparison! Took thought and effort! Nice one!
Charisma*

Haha i absolutly love this! :]

Written well. I liked it alot. Keep up the good work 5/5
Check mine out please

It was great

HAHAHAHAHA
Oh this made me giggle.
A beautifully written parody!