I understand and empathise with the feelings undermining this poem. (Sorry, I'm being lazy and I don't want to write any more lol.)
5/5

Wow, very heavy poem, its very good. you are good at showing your motions xx well done xxx

Ohhh this is so sad, yet such a pleasure to read and so beautifully written.
I adore the last stanza, it hit me hard, I found it to be very intense.
I thought in certain stanzas there seemed to be quite a few fillers which disrupted the flow at times, but apart from that this was beautiful.

Once again, watch that forced rhyming. Keep in mind also that you want to have proper grammar and spelling, punctuation also. It not only makes your poem have more structure, it helps the flow. Keep up teh great work. Thank you for comments and rates on my poems. God Bless 5/5
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