Comments : Dad

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Lemme rewrite this for you:

    I know some day will be gone
    And I'll be all alone...
    I know that day is coming soon
    and that I know for sure...

    You'll only be a memory that stays inside my mind...
    just a hole inside my soul within these locks and binds...
    I need you to be here with me
    --Not far, far, far away
    Where my arms can not reach you
    Where you get farther every day...

    Just once more, if your voice I'd hear....
    I need you to come over here...
    Again, I can't stop crying
    -- I am just a girl losing her mind...
    I cannot live my life, dear Daddy,
    Without you, here, By my side...

    Hope you like it.

    Good job, though. I could still feel the emotions.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White