Comments : Oh Friend My friend (model poem after Oh Captian My Captain)

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a wonderful poem. Great job. I love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I actually had tears in my eyes when I read this. Beautiful!!!
    Note: I'm not sure if this is intentional, but in the 2nd stanza there are some words that are not quite complete:

    "Let' laugh again, like old time friends"
    "I just don' know what else to do"
    "It' like a sentence without spaces"
    "It doesn' feel right without you"

    "Let's"
    "Don't"
    "It's"
    "Doesn't"

    But otherwise another brilliant write! 5/5

    Keep it up!!

    Josie