Awww thats cute, nice and light :) keep it up
loved the first two lines, great way to open it

I really liked this one. Although it didnt rhyme and there weren't many metaphores the message was pure and sweet. "But all that matters/ is me and you" that was my favorite stanza because its so true in love lots of things can tear two people apart but in the end the only thing that really did that was the people involved because its only their ideas that matter. Nice job. I liked this I can realte to it 100%