This is so sad.... It was good, but very sad.. I'm sorry for your loss, the flow and rhyme was amazing, and a great message, nice work there, wow...just so sad.. *hugs* You should post some more, after I read this poem, I went to your profile to see if you had any others, and I see that you or that this account is brand new. You've got talant, so keep using it. =) looking forward to seeing other poems posted.
-Ally