This poem has a suddle sadness about it. yet it is beautifully written. great work. it has such emotion and gives good imagry through out the poem

Gem
Great job on this poem. Imagery is wonderful.

The storm rages on
Powerful force of nature
Cleansing our tired earth

Love the image this creates.
Take Care Love Cindy

I just love your earthy poems. Just lovely. Super de Duper! Anotherr favorite. You should write a book, seriously, i would totally buy it!
Muah!
Carissa [=

Ohhh this was so pretty!
Now I have a peaceful feeling all over me =)
Beautifully done.

Another real good peice of work i enjoy reading your poetry hun :D

xxx alex xxx

Another wonderful Haiku collection. I'm enchanted by its descriptions which you had portrayed vividly. Keep them coming hun! I surely will keep on reading. =] Love, Debbie

The poems were good, but some of the syllables were off.

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice. Penned well. 5/5 I loved it
Check mine out please

"Cleansing our tired earth"

"Soaking everything"

They both have 6 syllables. But I guess how its how you say it. Normally, though, to shorten the a syllable you could put an apostraphy. Ex. Because, 'cause.

I love Haiku's.
And yours is just beautiful.

'The storm rages on
Powerful force of nature
Cleansing our tired earth'

Loved it 5/5

[Sarah]

Maybe its because of my english, but I was tought to say ev-ery-thing. Three syllables.