This is great...you put it together perfectly and it can relate with anyone! I give it a 5!
~Kayla~
AKA-AboveTheCrowd

*sniff sniff* ooooooohhhhhhhhhh, so touchingly sadd. gawd i liked it!
Carissa [[=

Amazing.
A heartbreaking read about a lost love. I can relate very much.... :[ The flow was flawless, the emotions were clear & strong, & your word usage was fabulous.

"Can't even remember the last time
We cuddled in a sweet embrace
Every time I look at you
It's like seeing a stranger's face."

^My favorite stanza. I have felt this before so I can def. relate. Spectacular job! Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.