Great poem it's so true! 5/5

Interesting subject to write a poem on, very touching. another 5/5 it was good. i think that it is amazing how it is so i don't have any constuctive critism lol. Keep it up!!!

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Lol...Tia is right...the subject u choose is Great and the poem is soo very inspiring...kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

This is beautiful...
I adore the lines:
''We can never just listen,
There's always something we must say.''
I thought they were very intense.
The ending was beautiful and elegantly written, a perfect way to wrap up.