Cool poem. I liked it. It was short and to the point. 5/5

Yup sweet poem real short and real well done :D

xxx alex xxx

Hey,
i've never read this kind of poetry style before, its very clever, short but its writen very well, great work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Nice work. It took me a few to get it, but once I got it, I was like that's so cool!! lol.. It was short, but it told what it needed, good job. Keep writing! =)
-Ally

It didn't really catch my attention.
It's well written, don't get me wrong
But I just found it filled with facts.
Hmm...
Still.
Format's great. You're creative.
I'll give you a 5/5 :]

I wasn't familiar with that style, but I am glad you had the courage to try it. You did a great job 5/5