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never will I allow you to die. BAD

This was so heartbreaking to read.
The depth and emotion scream through the words and the imageru creates very vivid pictures.
I thought in some places the flow seemed a little off, but apart from that it was beautiful.
I loved the last stanza, I thought it was intense and hardhitting and was a perfect way tp wrap up.

Me
Peace
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Those two do not rhyme.
I saw a bit of forced rhymed words, this one just stuck out to me the most. Just know in order to have a nice flowing poem, the rhyme can't seem forced. Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)