I loved that! It held so much truth in it that it made me want to scream. I didn't, of course haha, but I really loved this poem. All of your poems hold so much emotion in them.

"The hand of God striking me at each turn"

^^ I really liked that line, it struck something with me. =)

5.5

Bill
What a excellent job you have done on this write. Very deep emotions really come through.

Childlike and new I have become
New eyes showing me the world
Soft hands and heart opening the door
Ethereal plane of love beneath my feet
Noticing her soft eyes on the day we did meet

This stanza shows the hope and love in your life. Excellent !
Take Care your friend Cindy