Comments : These six words

  • 17 years ago

    by UNDERESTIMATED

    Hey thanks for reading my poems but please comment back...i need to know if you consider them to be good or not... i have realised a while back how amazing it feels to write your own poems by saying whatever you want and need....so thanks
    talk later...xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by UNDERESTIMATED

    Hey thanks for reading my poems but please comment back...i need to know if you consider them to be good or not... i have realised a while back how amazing it feels to write your own poems by saying whatever you want and need....so thanks
    talk later...xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey babes, good start on your poems. i think this one has real potential. I liked this as it was completely honest and filled with heart felt emotion.

    At times I bash through those walls but still holding that smile on my face.
    My eyes are bleeding, my hands tied shut, fists ready to fly, where is my angel that calls my name?
    this is my fav stanza.

    Keep up the good work! Keep ya chin up honey! mwah 5/5