Its = it's

ill = I'll

(remember, they are both two different words)

The last line, for sake of the flow, should be:

"I will say goodbye..."

Other than that, well done. I enjoyed this, and it was short, bitter, and to the point.

5/5
~Stephen White

:o I forgot to mention, capitalize your eyes. If you wish, check out my new article. It will help you understand why it is important.

Very good, i like it a lot