WOw this poem is crazy. I like it though. It's crazy that happens every day in this world but you captured that. It was written well. 5/5

WOW!...this is a truely awesome poem. it left me speechless.
You are a true and come forward poet..you wrote this and many of ur other poems from ur heart and everyone can tell. This poem showed not only emotion but it made the reader feel it as if it were really happening. Don't ever stop writng. You are a brilliant writer!

great great job!

luv,
~Shannon!~

Wow.
Even though it wasn't true - it felt like it was real, that's how good you wrote this poem. It was terribly sad, it almost made me cry. The flow was flawless & the emotions were clear & strong.

"Someone who's supposed to love me
Spends their time being so cruel
Have to spend all of my days
Hiding my bruises when in school."

^ My favorite stanza. Truly heartbreaking. Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

GOOD POEM 5/5....ONLY FOR ME ITS HALF WAY TRUE SO I IDENTIFY WITH IT.