Comments : To Be Your Girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That was so flippin sweet. Lmao.
    I have felt this before. Whenever I had this feeling, I was always having nonstop butterflies. Hehe.

    "Seems I've fallen hard for you
    Miss you all the time
    So long I've been wanting
    To be able to call you mine."

    ^ My favorite stanza.
    The flow was flawless, the word usage was great, & the emotions were strong & clear. Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    I feel this everyday. except i can't pick up the phone and talk to him. He won't talk to me and everythinks he is scared too. I wish i knew what to do. Your so lucky that you have someone like that there for you. This poem truely came from ur heart and thats what i like the most about it. not all writers can truely write from there hearts. but you my friend can.
    great great job!

    5/5
    love,
    ~Shannon~