Comments : You Wouldnt Lie

  • 16 years ago

    by Tempest

    Wow, I'm in a thing like that right now, very well written, Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenHeartStillBeat

    I love this it is perwctly written. Hope you write more. X

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Awesome, seriously awesome. I related to this poem so i loved it even more keep it up girl awesome work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Ah nice ending, i also liked how you explained the story. so i could understand a bit more bout the poem.

    5/5 David