Wow.

I have felt like this many times - Me & my mom don't get along really at all & when we do it's a rare occurance.
Anyway, fantastic poem. The flow was flawless, the word usage was great, & the emotions were clear & strong. You're a very talented writer, keep it up! ;] 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Amazing poem. Please keep writing I would love to read more.

Undescriblly wonderfully written poem, can relate to it the emotion and pain. keep writtng you r really good.
5/5
JAde

Such a great poem.
i think we all don't get along with our moms sometimes & we feel like our birth was a mistake & we wonder if we are loved or not.
but trust there's no mother would hate her own child.
but it's a sad yet such a great masterpiece.
keep it up:)

This is intense very good i love it

Wow..amazing write,felt chills up my spine
great work
u got talent
keep it up!
-Lisa

Pure emotion.....flawless.....

This one is really good

Wow, I found that a really emotive poem & very sad. I thought it flowed very well & included a lot of ideas. =]

It must be bad to know your mom liek that... i couldnt say.

Simply beautiful

-mello193