Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I LOVE THIS POEM ...........5/5............u put alot of emotiom in this poem .......check out someof my poems and tell me what you think .thankz and great poem again ......keep up da good work

Thank you for reviewing my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I spend alot of time writing and it feels good to know that my efforts aren't in vein. Thanks again

Hey! lovely poem, very well written, with lots of deapth..after the first line i was just wanting and wanting to read more, lol and the ending was beautiful too

----tara