Comments : MY LAST WORDS ( Ma Tears & Ma Pain)

  • 18 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Lovely poem, I couold feel the pain, the emotion the depth! I truly loved it! Keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by SuiCiDaS

    10x a lot..
    Like İ said in my text...
    U must feel bad 2 feel someday Good..!!!
    "U'll never know whats good İF U never saw bad"!!!

    PEACE OUT !!!

    SUİCİDE a.k.a ALİ CELİK

  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    You should submit this one in slang, not in love category. I like whole idea, it is interesting and original. Some parts of the poem ruin the whole flow and don't make much sense but all in all nice poem, very emotional and honest.