by Domino0792
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Lovely poem, I couold feel the pain, the emotion the depth! I truly loved it! Keep up the great work! |
by SuiCiDaS
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10x a lot.. |
by Nix
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You should submit this one in slang, not in love category. I like whole idea, it is interesting and original. Some parts of the poem ruin the whole flow and don't make much sense but all in all nice poem, very emotional and honest. |