I don't know just what to say to this. To make an understatement, this piece is powerful. Reading it, I found myself enraged and... perhaps a little frightened by the story you tell here, Megan.

Damn, such a good story i really liked it hun. your a good writer :D

xxx alex xxx

It's really disturbing. The images created a rather vivid, which in poetry is a good thing... despite how sickened I was.

It's really good. Well done for writing it.

I can relate. This is apowerfully written poem. The vivid sicking images are waht makes the words so strong. You did an excellent job. 5/5

Wow, a very interesting poem you have here. I love the metaphores used in this. I especially like how you swore, yet it was effective in the poem, not overbearing like others. The topic again, unique. You have heaps of talent, well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

Wow, this piece is very strong. It is an amazing piece of work and very well written. 5/5

That was pretty good but i wanna show u how a dude gets down. We have similar views on rape. check out my poem lost innocence. Im a guy but dont let that fool ya.

WHOAAAA!!!!! that was strong and amazing!! I went through the same thing!!

Whoaa!! Loved it

MUAH X

Emotiionsz