Wow thats true love, the transition, word choicing, situation, format everything was great 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This is so amazingly good, and so amazingly sad.. how do you do it?!!? haha <3

Amazing poems. This is another one of my best. I definately loved these stanzas:

"He's a mess of a dreamer", that's what they'd say,
When they'd see him standing there, day after day,
With tears on his cheeks, and stories in his eyes,
Desolately standing, from sunset to sunrise -

And if you stopped and took the time to ask,
He'd break out with a story, smiling to mask -
All the pain he swallowed, deep in his heart,
Standing by the gate and slowly falling apart.

&&

His eyes would go wide, when he finished and stared,
Down the dirt-trodden path to an oak tree, now stripped bare,
And in the bark, if you looked close you could see,
Two names carved in a heart, "George loves Amy."

He'd stop himself before he'd regretfully say,
To another person, how his wife died that day,
But he never forgot, the face of that young man,
When he shot the gun, laughing, he turned and ran.

5/5 AMAZING!

Yet another masterpiece. You have this way of capturing things that is so unique. Wise beyond your years...

5/5

Josie