Wow that was great and a gorgeous end to top it off. 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Wow thats really good i like it 5/5
if you get time maybe you could check out some of mine

This feeling marks exactly what I've been feeling .
you brought the emotions out and it hit me in the right spot.

excellent poem ! i loved it <3
keep writing =]

Powerful poem
you had a spelling error though, " thiat" is "that"
besides that it was perfect

Hmmm i liked d poem...keep writing buddy....(if u'll get time dO rate mine..)

Good, I really liked it!