The best of yours so far...
the structure of your poems, as I noticed in the last 2 i read, is very different from what I'm used to, very original, actually. You focused the theme of death a lot, what I also do myself...(I hope you're alright...)
this one has a lot of suspence in the middle, it makes the reader think if the person in the poem maybe doesn't kill herself (because of calling the guy first, etc.), the end is prettu sad, but still very well written...
5/5
*isabel*

*whoa*