Wow, that was a very emotional moving, yet sad poem. I loved it. I love the way it shows how we come alone like Jesus, and how we are only hallucinating when we feel complete as though we will never be alone again. It's like you're showing the world the harsh truth. Love it.

Sourav!!....this poem is just soo beautiful...omg.very well written!.so deep and touching...very powerful write!
Kp it up!...sure 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

So sad and deep, conveyed alot of emotions...
I love that.. "Only the illusion created by someone's love"
It's so contradicting.
Yes, we come and go alone like jesus.. someone's love creating a brief feeling of not being alone, even through we truly are alone. And yet in the next stanza you're craving love.. That feeling of being wanted by someone, of being their everything.
And insatiable quench.

Now I feel like I'm rambling.
Simply.. 5/5.

On another note... The F word in my poem, any suggestions of something to take it's place?

Your yearning and longing for Love is so tenderly and poetically portrayed here...
And what, after all, is Love?... In whose image, after all, are we made?....The actual illusion is that we are alone...Crucifixion was followed by Resurrection, yes?

Thats heartfelt poem , brilliantly penned.
Great write, keep it up.

Chavii.

Genuine sentiments were truly apparent throughout this piece, and have moved me in a way which an arrow strikes through my heart...

A compelling, heartfelt write. 'Twas a pleasurable read. I hope you all the best and take care!

Debbie

Wow excellent piece I liked this one lots of insight

Wow. this is simply amazing. are you a believer? im thinking you are, but neverknow....

that's actually how christ wants you to live. He wants us to live like Him, and i think that includes some of the loneliness....christ is not always loved. that hurts Him. so it makes sense that we feel this way as well...

^ just some insight....

great poem. and thank you for the comment on mine as well. god bless