Hi natalia is a beautifull poem so touching... i wish you where there too so much... take care

Very heartfelt poem. Great job!

I would have taken away all your sorrow
if I knew there would be no tomorrow.

These lines really touched my heart.
Take Care Cindy

"I would have taken away all your sorrow
if I knew there would be no tomorrow. "

That couplet spoke volumes..
We have to treat each day as if there was no tomorrow, its never to late to tell someone you love them and to make them feel loved..
This poem was so heartbreaking, yet beautiful at showing the emotion..
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

That was a very heartbreaking poem , reach touched ,brings tears to my eyes ,i really enjoyed reading it, great job, 5/5 your friend Tracy

Fantasic rhyming it really flowed wonderfully, great piece xox lithium

I really liked your poem