`Unaware of who she is,
Regal, rich and raw,
Naivety not innocence,
Is her tragic flaw. `

^^ You can start to imagine the picture/movie coming to mind. Love the line `Regal, rich and raw `

`Sin shall be her leader,
If it's the one that pays,`

^^ I also liked those two lines.

` Flying high upon success,
No limit can be found,
Then it's time to pay the price,
And you're falling to the ground. `

^^ I loved that stanza. Especially the last two lines.

I like the way you have that way with words that just paint a picture in your mind.

5/5