Short n sweet! i wouldnt change a thing! its ur way of expressing yourself and thats u!!! :)
amanda

Thanks for all your comments ...im gonna keep up sendin in my poems LOVE YA'S xx.

This poem is pretty good i love it, i just want to encourage you to keep it up!! 5/6

Short poem but also showed ur feelings all in one liked it it was the emotion that bought that poem out keep writing such good poetry xx