Its such a very wonderful work and powerful message.. the rhyme and flow are great. and i think its totally well written nothing else.. very interesting work of urs...

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I loved the flow of this poem, it's amazing. 5.0

A great read and awesome write. Rhyme, terminology, flow, structure... all work well together. Absolutly loved the way you wrote (typed) this..deffinatly one of my faves. IBE