Its beautiful Kumar, you did complete justice to the story we thought but its altogether your hard work ,proud to be any part of it ,thanks so much :)

Take care
chavii.

Excellent poem...Lovely lovely work!......so sweet and beautifully penned!...lol...the poem is just soo perfect!
5/5!
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

That was really nice!!!
Good Job

God bless u

Im bloody speechless rite now.. that was a truly breathtaking piece.. so deep n so affectionate .. loved going thru it again n again ..
Superb Poem..

~Wake~

Wonderful! I Love it!

5.5**
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This is soo beautiful and breath taking..I love it. <3

Yet there is a sense of satisfaction in the work i do,a sense of pride,
but there is a fear of whether you and i will walk as groom and bride".
excellent lines.my fav too.you both have done a great job.5